my campighning in my area (south west england)

Here is my Campaigning email i am sending out to people in my area:
Hello! my name is Mike Fletcher and i represent the political party INGSOC
INGSOC is based on the very popular book by George Orwell "1984" as you may also know as the "big brother" state, as a ultra-left Authoritarian party.
our main aims at the moment are to provide assistance to new players and help them get a foothold in the eUK. Our Manifesto includes State-controlled companies, free Food/gifts/weapons to new players and advanced military programmes, to reclaim apart of Britain's once-great empire! I would like to know if you would be interested in voting for me as your local candidate. if you have any questions, or need any help, please feel free to ask, and feel free to join INGSOC if you would like to. if not, then have fun playing, and still feel free to contact me for any help you might need!
War is Peace, Freedom is Slavery, Ignorance is Strength

Does this seem ok or should i make any alterations?

Fine, just tone out the empire building part, that isnt our offical policy.

my bad -ii went over the top too much with the national pride changed

Good emails, pleased that you have got so involved, any ideas for my next article?